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First off, how did you do the animation? If you did it frame by frame then please make a tutorial teaching me the wonderful method to produce that in just two days of work. Other than that I will state the obvious. You are an idiot for not taking this film after you turn it into the school and then finishing it before you submit it to Newgrounds. This could of been a front page chart topper if you would have taken a bit more time on it. Anyway, I believe that you know that already so I won't trouble you by saying it again. I'm not kidding about the tutorial by the way.